Tuesday, September 22, 2026

Letting in drafts


What follows is another piece for which the writing process extends over twenty years. The first draft of 4325 Baltimore Avenue was written in the Rittenhouse Square Barnes & Noble break-room in 2004. Had it around, read it up in Henniker a few times, and Jeffrey Ethan Lee published this early draft of the piece in 2005. After dusting it off in the Twenties for possible inclusion in Something Solid, I applied a maelstrom approach, of discipline (has to fit the double-sonnet format) and a limber approach to recreating connective tissue, including syntactic levels. So, here we have it on P.F.S. Post: buffed, polished, and radically tautened. To restate, 4325 Baltimore Avenue was an artist's co-op where Mary Evelyn Harju lived for a few years in the early Aughts. I was a frequent visitor, of course, and spent several months worth of nights there. Abby Heller-Burnham was a constant presence, too. This shot was taken of Mary on the third, top-floor of the row-home, in 2001. Mary doing a wonted fashionista routine.  

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